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Night-Glider

Age/Gender: 15, Female
Location: Britain
Job: Cartoonist, author

I was once known as 'The-Hyper-Sniper'. If I submit anything in the future going under that name, It's mine.

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Night-Glider

The Dawn of the treachourous tankmen

Posted by Night-Glider May. 22, 2008 @ 3:27 PM EDT

A trail of grey smoke shot through the sky and ended by a building, an explosion once it made contact. The building from afar gradually collapsed into itself, the glass shattering, the ground rumbling. A pair of black binoculors was pulled away from the eyes by a tank man. His eyes gleaming red. He cried out thunderously, "ATTACK!". A swarm of black uniformed soldiers stormed down the hill towards newgrounds.

At that moment, a siren began to pick up its volume, warning everyone in the city. The citizens ran for shelter. The gates burst open and a stampeding group of animations ran out of the city, ready. Dirge (©JamesFarr) spun his shovel about in his hands like a propeller. Hamster (©Dave) stood by him, grinning. "I do my hamster kata! I are MONK!". He leapt into the air, a flash of light, then he landed back on the ground in a ninja out fit. The other characters stared at him in bewilderment. Pico (©TomFulp) pointed at him and asked to his people, shaking his head "Who let this guy in Newgrounds Defense system?". They shrugged.

The troops were closing in, rushing down hill towards the portal. Just as the cartoons drew their attention towards the army, they gasped. Upon one of the glistening tanks, stood an animation, proud, grinning with monsterous delight. "I will PWN J00!" roared Piconjo (©Sickdeathfiend), holding up his sword. The Xombie (©JamesFarr) cocked his head and gave a small laugh. "I think it's time we show this punk how to use proper Grammer". Bitey (©AdamPhillips) cackled madly in his hairy face

The crowds of cartoons collided into a sea of battling bodies, throwing themselves around, jumping, slashing, kicking, biting, scratching in the most monsterous manner.

T.H.S was shocked to see the hypnotism of some of her friends, whom had joined the evil army. She recieved a shot in the arm by Jacob, standing by the tank with a thompson gun. She dove behind a pile of rubble and started reloading, when she turned to see Hamster (©Dave), wounded. "Ooooh, it are suckiest!" he wailed, covering his wound with his bloody paws. T.H.S took out her kit and quickly, nervously as a body flew above her head yelling, and covered his wound. "Horray!" squealed Hamster (©Dave) happily. They darted from behind the rubble and returned to the fight. Hamster (©Dave) rested upon her shoulder, spinning about a pair of nunchucks. "Hii-ya! Wataya! ping!".

Within the center of the crowd, Piconjo ©Sickdeathfiend) and Pico (©TomFulp) slashed at each other with their golden swords. Nene (©TomFulp) was struggling to regain her stability, when she whacked across the back of the head and fell to the earth. Darnell (©TomFulp), fished out of his pocket a lighter. He then took out of his rucksack a bottle of wine. He took a swig of the drink, holding it in his mouth before blowing and causing an eruption of flame to strike the evil king. Piconjo (©Sickdeathfiend) roared, he span around and in a moment, the fire had gone, smoke arising from his hair and shirt. Darnell (©TomFulp) was picked up the throat from behind by Strawberry Clock (©StrawberryClock) and chucked into the sea of soldiers.

Alien Hominid (©TomFulp) hovered above the ground and blasted balls of plasma from his gun. The enemy vaporising before the people's eyes. The ginger haired king growled, launching himself from the earth and onto the aliens ship. The ship swurved around in the air like a confused house fly, trying to rid of Piconjo (©Sickdeathfiend). He stuck his sword into the ship, red lights flashed inside, the guns went haywire, blasting everyone everywhere. Zoe (©JamesFarr) was riding Cerberus (©JamesFarr) through the battle. She was holding a luminous container with a digital clock stuck to the side, counting down, slowly....

To be Continued....

Updated: 05/31/08 5:15 AM Log in to comment! | Share this!

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8 Comments

May. 25, 2008 | 12:07 AM 8912 says:

we need more lazy people like me and you it could help our world and the story was pretty cool!!

May. 25, 2008 | 6:55 AM Night-Glider responds:

its not quiet finished. im stil thinki...... zzzzzzzzzz


May. 25, 2008 | 9:40 PM jacobcoooollll10 says:

O.o yay u used my ideas! but short story lol

May. 26, 2008 | 9:15 AM Night-Glider responds:

More ideas = longer story


May. 26, 2008 | 5:33 PM jacobcoooollll10 says:

um ok the tankmen are fighting pico and the others and.... we have to stop them yeah..... good?

May. 27, 2008 | 7:50 AM Night-Glider responds:

Thank you :)


May. 27, 2008 | 8:02 PM jacobcoooollll10 says:

ok cool how about this big battle and we have to chose whose side were gonna be on! yeah!!!

May. 28, 2008 | 8:36 AM Night-Glider responds:

hmmm.... im not sure :l


May. 30, 2008 | 5:38 PM jacobcoooollll10 says:

i gots another idear!!!! how about some of us were tricked into joining the tankmen side? good?

May. 31, 2008 | 4:43 AM Night-Glider responds:

ooooo! i loveit! :D


Jun. 1, 2008 | 8:30 PM jacobcoooollll10 says:

hmmm i like it :) but so....were is general wers you? and T.H.S. is a bad guy right? or 'ahem' bad girl?

Jun. 2, 2008 | 2:02 AM Night-Glider responds:

I am T-H-S. everyone will be introduced to later


Jun. 3, 2008 | 4:18 PM jacobcoooollll10 says:

i have a new story


Jun. 25, 2008 | 8:19 PM Wraith2000 says:

Boring. I'd like something more orginial. Not loads of previously existing NG characters tediously attacking each other.
Try to make your writing more descriptive. Try using a thesaurus.

Jul. 22, 2008 | 4:31 PM Night-Glider responds:

okee dokee
thank you for the criticism :)

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